I have gone utterly and completely mad.
Yet, I find myself wishing it not go away.
How can anyone question my love for you?
Do they not see the way my body leans to you?
Even though you are on the other side of the world?
Do they not know that my heart yearns for your touch?

Give me your undying love
Make me immortal with your kiss
And let us make this everlasting commitment
Once and for all
Let us go back in the day
When lovers were lovers
And love in its pure undying form
Was secure, a safe haven

My mind is yours to have
My body to hold
Make it yours
Inside and out
Rain or shine
I will be with you
I will nurse your wounds
And celebrate your health
Cleave to me
As I submit my all to you

I’m ready to give my life
My all to you
I’m ready to be the best woman
I could possibly be
Let me share my love with you
Serene, uninhibited and uncomplicated
Let me give you everything that I have
Mind body and soul.

Let us stay together
Let us last forever
Let us be One.

A friend of mine said I was difficult and un-romantic.
So, I wrote this.

Comments (36)

On August 6, 2009 at 12:09 AM , RocNaija said...

Luv it..
Absolutely luv it..

On August 6, 2009 at 12:45 AM , Rene said...

Me likey!
next time tell dt friend that you don't have to prove anything to her. If it bother her then she should deal with it!

On August 6, 2009 at 2:26 AM , bob-ij said...

Umm..this is so so romantic..IN YOUR FACE FRIEND!...lol...
It's nice, sweet and sincere...:D

On August 6, 2009 at 2:40 AM , Nice Anon said...

Gosh! Yes sir! I am smitten! So fucking smitten but wait you are a babe. Lol
but hey i love it!

On August 6, 2009 at 2:57 AM , leggy said...

lol...so fabulola

On August 6, 2009 at 2:58 AM , leggy said...

this is wat u do in ur spare time eh kwa?

On August 6, 2009 at 2:58 AM , leggy said...

dreaming of boys?

On August 6, 2009 at 3:00 AM , leggy said...

lol...nice poem

On August 6, 2009 at 3:00 AM , leggy said...

is this considered spamming?

On August 6, 2009 at 3:00 AM , leggy said...

just wondering oh...biko dont get ur hackles up

On August 6, 2009 at 3:00 AM , leggy said...

kachi foo...kk..kk im out.

On August 6, 2009 at 7:19 AM , ~Sirius~ said...

This is tooooo deep for a non- romantic.
She might want to take what she said back.

On August 6, 2009 at 9:15 AM , SHE said...

Point Made.

Bet they're extra-convinced now.

On August 6, 2009 at 9:18 AM , Bubbles said...

how precious

On August 6, 2009 at 9:48 AM , UnderCover07 said...

Nice...luv'd it!!!!

On August 6, 2009 at 10:55 AM , Fabulo-la said...

Thanks guys...
Mehn my heart wa RACING when I was writing this...
I wonder why...
And it was a dude that doubted my romantic abilities.

And leggy stop spamming me biko!
And yes this is what I do in my spare time...and at work...and sometimes when im on a date sef, i bring out my phone and just start typing..
Im kidding o!

Thanks again guys :)

On August 6, 2009 at 12:13 PM , Repressed One said...

err this just means you're a good writer...

*dodges stones* I keed, I keed!! lol

It's very awww-inspiring :). Well done!

On August 6, 2009 at 12:23 PM , Sassy Trends said...


@fabulola...this is sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!

On August 6, 2009 at 12:39 PM , Fabulo-la said...

@RepressedOne: lool!
No u didnt!
Come lemme show romance..infact u know what, I will write on just for u.lool

@Sassy: Thanks babes :)
NO mind leggy o!

On August 6, 2009 at 1:19 PM , Tay-mee said...

Woah..romantic it is.
I wish I could write as well..*sobs*

On August 6, 2009 at 8:10 PM , BSNC said...

beautiful write up...

hope ur friend can see this now.

On August 7, 2009 at 7:05 AM , shaifamily said...

oh yea?

On August 7, 2009 at 12:03 PM , Buttercup said...

Aww I can totally relate to it..loved it! Hope you've shown your friend??

On August 8, 2009 at 5:30 PM , miss.fab said...

What. Did you really write this? Amazing! Love love love it!

On August 9, 2009 at 3:08 PM , Ebony~!* said...

This cannot be from an unromantic person. Just someone hiding emotions behind a veil. Nice poem! keep it coming.

On August 10, 2009 at 2:31 PM , Original Mgbeke said...

LOVE it. It can totally be said as wedding vows. This babe maybe you should quit the engineering track and stick to writing Poetry...yeah? :-D

On August 10, 2009 at 5:06 PM , Fabulo-la said...

@OM:uhhh thnks! I wish...I have thought abt it sha but after x years in school? iono o...


i did o...cant believe it either..:)

@Buttercup:yah..lol..needless to say he was intrigued.lol


@BSNC: thnx :)

@Tay-mee:...trust me, if i can, you can :)

On August 10, 2009 at 7:15 PM , ibiluv said...

nice.........very nice......

On August 11, 2009 at 2:01 PM , Tisha said...

if i was the guy
i would have fallen in-love
by now
if i was not in-love b4

this has depth and it really
(and i can be very cold o, when i want to be)

On August 11, 2009 at 9:46 PM , Nice Anon said...

you cannot just charm us and then not update

On August 12, 2009 at 4:42 AM , Temite said...

OH DEAR!!! I loved IT!

On August 12, 2009 at 6:54 AM , Afronuts said...

Has 'he' read this? Cause he has to...Guys are usually knocked off their rockers by deep thinking babes like u...lol

On August 12, 2009 at 5:11 PM , BSNC said...

here is a joke i dug up for you. You better get this one...lol

The youngest son in a family asked his father: "Daddy, what's the difference between 'potential' and 'reality'? Dad: "I will show you." He turned to his wife and asked: "Would you sleep with Tom Cruise for two million dollars?" Wife: "Yes. I would never waste such an Opportunity to become a millionaire." Then dad turned to his daughter: "Would you sleep with Will Smith for 1 million dollars?" Daughter: "Yes. That is my fantasy." Dad turned to his older son: "Would you sleep with Denzel Washington for 1 million dollars?" Son: "Yes! Imagine what I would do with $1 million." Then Dad concluded by telling his youngest son: "You see, "potentially", we are sitting on $4 million. But in "reality" we are living with 2 prostitutes and 1 gay dude. Did that answer your question?."

On August 12, 2009 at 6:06 PM , David Numba-one God'sfave said...

@ BSNC...LWKMD!!! nice one...hehehehe!!!

@fab...nice, deep and ROMANTIC! Maybe the dude likes you and is only tryin to push ur buttons to see if you can warm up to him a lil...supposing you haven't.


On August 13, 2009 at 5:49 PM , Ms. Dufa said...

That your friend was so wrong! This is so tew tew beautiful! Me likey likey like! Infact I love....I totally love it. Nice one. Really good.

On August 13, 2009 at 11:42 PM , uNWrItten* said...

u are totally romantic!!!..lol..i might have to quote some of this :)