Have I found you?
Beating half of my heart.

[Our minds intertwined as one]

Did my heart unconsciously call out to you?
Eager and open?

Have I found you?

Or am I staring at a reflection of my memory,
remembering it into existence?



Listening to: Flightless Bird- Iron and Wine

Comments (20)

On July 11, 2010 at 2:58 AM , akaBagucci said...

only you can tell us. :)

 
On July 11, 2010 at 7:41 AM , T.Notes said...

Exactly@Bagucci.

So tell us...or better still drop a piece about "He-Beating half of my heart" n we might have a better clue from which to comment.

Tho the fact that u do wonder,might suggest that maybe "yes,you might have found "you"???

 
On July 11, 2010 at 12:39 PM , Miss Natural said...

lol nice one bagucci. I really like the last two lines, reflection of my memory; remembering it into existence. Very deep. Hopefully you would have processed your thoughts enough to tell us whether 'its' the real deal or a figment of your imagination.

 
On July 11, 2010 at 7:39 PM , olusimeon said...

i feel like saying "good question"..and tell right after that " i don't have the answers you seek"
good thing is .. i'm not lost..after reading

 
On July 11, 2010 at 7:54 PM , Abimbola Bamigboye said...

I see your questions. For I have asked them too. And i raise you one..do you listen to your heart?

Love the song.

p.s. you'll know...

 
On July 11, 2010 at 10:50 PM , Nice Anon said...

They said when that bit of you comes along.. somehow you'd know.

 
On July 12, 2010 at 10:13 AM , bArOquE said...

so, did you or have you not? you only can answer those questions....

 
On July 12, 2010 at 1:15 PM , Anonymous said...

Nice One, dear.

 
On July 12, 2010 at 8:20 PM , bob-ij said...

DO you think you have?

~x~

 
On July 13, 2010 at 8:48 AM , ~Sirius~ said...

Deep........really deep.

 
On July 13, 2010 at 1:12 PM , Unknown said...

f - lola
u r my sister from another mother
and father too
lol
This is indescribable.

 
On July 13, 2010 at 1:13 PM , Unknown said...

f - lola
u r my sister from another mother
and father too
lol
This is indescribable.

 
On July 15, 2010 at 12:10 AM , Harry said...

lovely

 
On July 15, 2010 at 1:20 PM , leggy said...

lol@remembering it into existence-->i love that line.
mschewww, fabulola biko, just come and say that you are in love.

 
On July 16, 2010 at 1:28 AM , Kafo said...

WHAT
this is beyond deep
it is hmmm i guess a black hole of depth

i love the brevity yet wealth of the piece

 
On August 8, 2010 at 4:21 PM , Miss Natural said...

where are you!!! lol come backkkkk! ps dont you just hate the stupid Chinese or whatever characters they are?? they piss me off!

 
On August 11, 2010 at 5:34 AM , SHE said...

So, is it a strong memory? or the real thing?

Do you now know?

 
On August 22, 2010 at 3:58 PM , Unwind said...

conviction is a strong ornament of the soul! love the abstract to this! new on the block

 
On August 25, 2010 at 6:17 AM , The Girl with the Red Hair said...

Do you now know which it is?

 
On September 18, 2010 at 2:57 PM , Spesh said...

deep stuff!